@fire7side said: I don't know if it's part of your style, but you change tenses. For instance, if you say, once upon a time, you normally maintain the past tense. So you say, she lived, not she lives, because once upon a time is something that has already happened. If you are doing that on purpose, then it's basically all right. I saw another place in the intro that you also did it with the hole thing. I wouldn't recommend it, myself. The art and story look good.
The intro is supposed to be presented like a storybook. That explains the whole "Once upon a time" thing.
Just to clear things up about the camera view thing yesterday, did you want to the game to be like LSD Dream Emulator but as a side-scroller or like a top-down Earthbound-like game?
